Last year I with my friend went to camping in Prambanan. Each group had nine person. After each person arrived the Prambanan they seek group. I joined with my group to make a tent. I built a tent, in place that had been prepare. After that we perform the opening ceremony. after the ceremony finished we break.
After break we did some games in Prambanan. I very happy with all games. after playing we take a bath and praying. And then i saw the Ramayana Ballet at 19.00 in Prambanan. I really liked the Ramayana ballet, because Ramayana Ballet was very interesting and good for me. After Ramayana Ballet finish we gave applause. after that I went back to the tent.
In the morning we saw the class in the teacher camp. At 07.00 we gather with each academic advisors. Academic advisors divide we into management class. After finished grade division steward, we packing containers for went to home.
change the verbs into the form of verb 2 such as do to did, finish to finished, is to was.
BalasHapusyour text is good by the way.
paragraf 1 : After each person arive the Prambanan they seek group / After each person arrive the Prambanan they seek group
BalasHapusparagraf 2 : . And then i saw the Ramayana Ballet at 19.00 in Prambanan / And then I saw the Ramayana dancing at 19.00 in Prambanan.