Since I was in first grade, my junior high school of my dream was 8 JHS Jogja. My reason was simple because my mother was an alumnus of 8 JHS. I always dreamed that someday I will entered the school's building and my dream became true when I was got an opportunity to joined with my 6th grade classmates at some try out SD preparing for national examination which held in 8 JHS Jogja.
I was so excited because I'd been waited for 6 years and my mother already told me a lot about her JHS schools. At 8 am I arrived at 8 JHS and with a big confident I stepped to the front gate and entered the middle door of the front school yard. It was a mistakes. I always thinking that the middle door of 8 JHS was the gate to corridor which will took to the class. But actually it was an aula. I was so embarassed because stepperd to the wrong door. But I'm not alone. A lot of try out's participants are experienced same thing happened to me. After I asked to security guard, now I am entered the right door. But the new problem was came. I'd got lost. The school's map was so confused when I read it on the announcement board so I'd decide to took it myself. After rounded the school and got pissed because whenever I stopped and think I was got to my destination, it always ended with the same spooky school toilet; I gave up and asked to some seniors. I'm so suprised that my try out's class was behind the basketball's basket!
I was late to the class, of course, after all those confused moment. The teacher who was charged to keep my class are forgive me, he or she (I forgot) told me it was often happened to the new person which the first time entered the building. Hohoho. After the moment, I declared some stupid vow that I would never entered 8 JHS again!
you have a good text, however, be careful with the use of always and will such as "I always dreamed" "I always thinking" "I will entered". It should be will/always+verb 1.
BalasHapusremove the double verb in the sentence such as "I was got" "the new problem was came". it should be I got and the new problem came.