The first time I was in SMP 4 Pakem , I felt happy, because i had lots of new friend. At that moment on Monday, I went to school for the first time in SMP 4 Pakem. The first day of school we had a flag ceremony and mos fo a week. The closing MOS was held at Prambanan.
Eventhough I waqs tired, I still felt happy.
Boma Angger Dwicahyo 8c/8
"mos fo a week" revise it.
BalasHapus"The first time I was in SMP 4 Pakem , I felt happy, because i had lots of new friend." revise to "The first time I was in SMP 4 Pakem , I felt happy because I had lots of new friend."
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