Rabu, 10 Agustus 2011

MY EXCITING EXPERIENCE


                Before vacation of the end of the schooling year, my mother told me that we would go to Lombok Island. We would go with my mother’s friends.

                Last vacation, my mother, my mother’s friends, and I went to Lombok Island. It was an exciting vacation. We went to Lombok Island by plane. It was my first time to have a trip by plane. We bought plane tickets in  Juanda Airport, Surabaya. I took Lion Air. I sat beside my mother. It is a big plane. It has three seats for each side. Before we took off, the passenger attendants told us some instructions. One of them, the passenger had to wear seat belt when the plane took off and landed. We was chewing a bubble gum when the plane was taking off. It flew over twenty one feet above the sea surface. I had several talks with my mother. It took 40 minutes to reach Selaparang Airport, Mataram. I took a deep breath while it was landing because it had a hard landing. I felt joyful when I found all passengers safe. Then, we spent the night in a hotel near airport.

                I felt very happy because it is the first time to me to have a flight. I’ll never forget it.

1 komentar:

  1. "I’ll forget it." revise to "I will never forget about it".

    the rest are very good. I love that, I hope you can help your friends make a text as yours.
    keep writing, naomi.

    BalasHapus