Rabu, 10 Agustus 2011

Go to camping with my friend

   Las year I went camping with my friend in the camping ground Pakem.We went from my elementary school,Kanisius Sengkan.We are very happy before leaving.We also prayed at the Banteng church first. 
   In the camping ground Pakem, we played some games. Like played ball , and ropes. We also set up a tent.
   In the evening , the rain was started.We could not continue the game.We so sad. In the last we just dinner.Although we are disappointed but we still happy because they can went camping.The next day we returned to our respective homes.

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2 komentar:

  1. Anonim11 Agustus 2011 pukul 11.16

    cannot continue --> could not continue

    your text is good by the way.

    BalasHapus
  2. Naomi Dian Cahyaningsih / VIII C / 2314 Agustus 2011 pukul 10.19

    I found an incorrect sentence, namely "We so sad." Iy should be typed as "We were so sad."

    I found an uncommon use of the adverb "In the last". It is better for you to use "At last" or "Finally".

    BalasHapus

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