Rabu, 10 Agustus 2011

Go to Kuwaru beach

     A week ago,I go to Kuwaru Beach with my family dan my cousin.Around 7 o'clock we go to kuwaru beach use car from my grandmother home.My grandmother live in srandakan.the home not far from kuwaru beach,around 7 km from kuwaru beach
     After arriver in the kuwaru beach parking area.We directly go to kuwaru beach.My cousin and I make an big hole use sand. .and around 15 later Iooked some people almost sink.After 1 hours we playing sand and water.We back to home.Before back to home we buy the food .
     After buy the food,we back to home.we was very happy altough tired and dirty. 

by :Alfiani dita sari (VIII C /05)
 

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  1. karin febrya 8C/1610 Agustus 2011 pukul 18.37

    Around 7 o'clock we GO to kuwaru beach use car from my grandmother home.

    change into : Around 7 o'clock we WENT to kuwaru beach use car from my grandmother home.

    BalasHapus
  2. Anonim11 Agustus 2011 pukul 11.03

    Karin was right,try to use verb two in your sentence. thanks.

    BalasHapus

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