Rabu, 10 Agustus 2011

My Exciting moment at JatimPark


I go to malang with my friends,I enjoy the trip all night, i can't see anything outside the bus because so dark…
i arrived at malang sunday morning, after that we prayed at the mosque, after that I showered in the hotel and eat,after that we go to JatimPark malang,We very happy in Jatim Park….

M.Ivansyah C.H
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  1. Anonim11 Agustus 2011 pukul 11.06

    Ivan, try to read your friend text. separate each information to the paragraph and use verb 2 in your sentence.

    BalasHapus

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