When my holiday was came, my family and I went to the Tawangmangu village in Karanganyar. We went to there by car. My uncle drove the car. I was very happy. My cousin said that Tawangmangu had cold air. So, I brought jacket, shocks, and long trousers. My little brother also brought them for protected him from cold air, because he had fever. We went to there at 13.00 p.m. We enjoyed the view because in Karanganyar, there were a lot of high land.
I had headache because the way was winding. But, I can not slept. I just looked at the nature view. After 1 hour, we arrived at Tawangmangu village. We were so happy. I played badminton with my cousins. We played together. But, it was rainy. So, we can not played again. Next, I ate soto. It was a hot soto. But, I like it. At night, we built tent. It was a big tent. I don't slept in tent because I was cold. So, I slept in lodgement/ villa. I felt warm in villa.
At 6 a.m., we must went to our house. I was sad because I must went to house and I can not played with my cousins. But, it was a happy holiday for my family and I. I wish that I can go back to that place. Amen.
Esensi Tarian Geometri
12/ 8C
Hai, Esen. Very good writing. You use right tense very well. Using a past tense to tell a past experience. my revision are remove the comma before "and" & "because". Thank you. Revise it then.
BalasHapusthank you :) okay, I will revise it :)
BalasHapus