At Sunday, in babarsari field my dog and i joined in this party. I get the information from my uncle. I very love my dog. My dog is my love that never cant be replced.
I went to Dog Party at 10.00 o’clock and arrived at 10.30 o’clock. In there, we did many activities there were see dog competition, run comprtition, etc.
My dog and i was very happy ..
"I very love my dog" revise to "I love my dog so much".
BalasHapususe a capital letter in "I".
elsha, it's very good text. you said clearly the each of paragraph. keep writing.