To fill my holiday, one week ago I visited Kuwaru Beach, in Bantul. I went to Kuwaru Beach with my family.
We went to Kuwaru Beach at 08.00 and we arrived at 09.00. After my father parked the car, we walked to the beach. There is a beach that had some trees named “Cemara Udang” trees. We unfold the mat under the tree. Then me and my brother walked to the coast. We wait a wave. If the wave came to me, I usually hope the wave. At 12.00 me and my family back to home, and we arrived at 13.00.
I was very happy, because I can got a new situation and forgot my problem.
By: Kartika Nurmalita Sari ( 8C/17 )
"To fill my holiday, one week ago I visited Kuwaru Beach" revise to " one week ago I visited Kuwaru Beach in my holiday".
BalasHapus"Then me and my brother" revise to "my brother and I"
"I can got " revise to " I got" or " I could forget"
it's a nice writing, Sari.