Kamis, 11 Agustus 2011

First Time My Mother Left Me

When i was in playgroup my mother left me in school,I was cried very loud that because its the first time when my mother left. I'm looked for my mother every where, i walk around the school to finded my mother. Next day i was hugged my mother tightly i wont let her go, But i cant stop her go.
 Thats thing is always happened in 1 week, but in next week i not cried again.
that was a great experience

1 komentar:

  1. "I'm looked " revise to "I looked".
    Use a capital in using "I" such as "I walked".
    "but in next week i not cried again" revise to "after that, I never cry anymore".
    "Thats thing is always happened in 1 week" revise to " The thing was going for one week".

    BalasHapus