on school my class planted to played a futsal match. The futsal game will be held in bal-balan. the game is between odd absent number and even absent number. I joined odd absent number because my absent is 13.
when the game began my team left behind 1-0 but we can cacthed up and lead. when the first hour end we take a break. Me and some of my friend go to game statiton to play game online, while the others play futsal with some girl, they even take a picture with the girl.The second match is not as fun the first match maybe because we already tired but that day was really fun.
Giordan 8c/14
correct me if i'm wrong. thanks
"my class planted to played" revise to "my class planned to play"
BalasHapus"Me and some of my friend go" revise to " Some of my friends and I went"
"is not as fun" revise to "is not as fun as"
you should a capital letter in the beginning of your sentence by the way. thanks.