When I was in six grade, I had a followed a football competition. At that time I was in a football club in cangkringan. The name of this club is TMC ( Tunas Merapi Cangkringan ).
One day I went to maguwoharjo stadium for a football competition, I left at 10 AM . when I arrived there, I immediately prepared my self. The match beginning, our team won the match as the grand champion.
After we want home, we was given a gift from our coach, we felt so happy.
use a capital letter in your beginning sentence.
BalasHapus"I had a followed a football competition" revise to "I followed a football competition".
"At that time, I was the member of football club in Cangkringan."