Rabu, 10 Agustus 2011

Malang :)

   My family planned to go to Malang. At Friday, we went to Malang at 06.00 by car. This is my first time at Malang, I’m very happy:D at 10.00 we arrived at Sidoarjo Jawa Timur, we have sufficient time so we planned to go to Lumpur Lapindo. There we saw a sea of mud, and at around mud is very hot. After we saw of mud in Lapindo, we continue the tour to Malang. At 12.30 p.m we arrived at Malang;D and we stopped at the Plaza Jawa Timur and ate together. After we ate together, we went to Santika Hotel for rest and stayed.
At Saturday morning, we planned went to the Safari Park Prigen:D we went to the SPP at 09.00. Before we went to the park we must bought tickets. After we got tickets we saw animals by car. We were so happy, and didn’t forgot take photos with animals for remember, we can took photos with they because they released free. After satisfied saw the animals we ate together in  a restaurant. After ate, we went to fruit garden Batu, Malang. At 14.30 p.m we arrived at “Selecta Garden”. At there we can pick fruits and flowers,I pick apples, oranges, and some flowersJ I was happy, and don’t forgot we took photos at there:D haha:D
 After we satisfied at Selecta Garden we went go back to hotel, we must rest because at Sunday morning we went go back to JogjaJ

1 komentar:

  1. use a comma correctly. just use after connecting words.
    try to use a capital letter in the beginning of your sentence.
    revise your verb such as always/must/will/ +v1 not V2.

    thanks.

    BalasHapus