Kamis, 11 Agustus 2011

My first experience in 4 PAKEM JHS

Last year I graduated from elementary school, I joined at 4 Pakem Junior High School. I was very happy,because I became one of students of 4 Pakem Junior High School.On July 2010, it was my first day in 4 Pakem Junior High School.I went to school and then I met a lot of new friends. First I met Putrika , I was very happy because I had a friend to talk and I got a new friend.The first event was a flag ceremony.After that we went to my class (7B).Our lesson was started and I felt nervous.After it, my new friends and I got break for a few minutes .My friend went to the canteen and bought some snacks to ate.After that my friends and I follow the lesson again and after that we went back to their homes.The day was very impressive to me.

NOVITA MELATI A.P
VIIIC / 24

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  1. Anonim11 Agustus 2011 pukul 10.11

    "Flag ceremony started to first event" revise to "the first event was a flag ceremony".
    "we must went to my class " revise to "we went to my class".
    "Our lesson was started.I felt nervous" revise to "Our lesson started and I felt nervous".
    try to find another same errors in your text. keep writing, novi. thanks

    BalasHapus
  2. Naomi Dian Cahyaningsih / VIII C / 2314 Agustus 2011 pukul 10.01

    The usage of the words "friend" is incorrect. The correct one is "I met a lot of new friends."

    BalasHapus

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