August 11, 2010, I attended SMPN 4 Pakem. My school was on the road Ground. The atmosphere of my school clean and tidy.
My first activitied at school is the flag ceremony. After the ceremony, my activitied at school are studied. Learning began at 07:40 until 12:55. After finish learning, I went home by bus.
I was happy to go SMPN 4 Pakem, karenan state schools clean and comfortable, but it also got a new friend.
Zufar Hilmy Pratyaksa 8C/ 30
"The atmosphere of my school clean and tidy." revise to "The atmosphere of my school is clean and tidy."
BalasHapus"karenan state schools clean and comfortable" what is that mean?
"My first activitied at school is the flag ceremony" revise to "My first activities at school was the flag ceremony"
it's nice, Zulfar. try to revise it first yah.