The first time I ride a bike when I was still in elementary school grades 1.in trying to cycling, I often fell but did not reduce the enthusiasm for cycling.
I got many hurt when i fall from bicycle.I so happy when i can cycling.
M.Ivansyah C.H
8C/21
"The first time I ride" revise to "The first time I rode".
BalasHapus" I often fell" revise to "I often failed".
Anyway make a good text.
paragraph 1= state when, where, what, and who
paragraph 2=events (you learn how to ride a bicycle)
paragraph 3= says what do you fell in learning to ride a bicycle.